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Thesis Statement

Family is a great support and security in one's life.

Proof #1 Family life could mean, for instance, the life of a commune with over a dozen members who all share a household, but who are not necessarily related to each other by blood. It could signify a 'blended' family

B. Proof #2

We are deeply attached to them and need them for our emotional wellbeing

II. Proof #1 (credibility appeals? rational appeals? something from your experience chart?) e. Change is centered to life,

B. Proof #2 (credibility appeals? rational appeals? something from your experience chart?) l. The more we articulate our feelings, the more we ...